It is really good! The style of it reminds me of speranza's Scrabble, except the 2 POVs aren't side by side. The actual story is really interesting. The plot is a cliche, but there's enough detail and thought put into it that it doesn't feel cliche. It's possible that I was reading too much into it, but I thought it might have been trying to say something about fandom/porn/getting off without direct human vs. sex with other people. You'll have to read it and tell me what you think.
Umm...way to go on that. Do you have a deadline that you have to have the updated manifesto in by? How is the S1 manifesto btw? I haven't looked at it in a while.
Also, Tuesday I'm going to a midnight screening of the HP movie. Are you?
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Date: 2007-07-07 02:03 pm (UTC)Umm...way to go on that. Do you have a deadline that you have to have the updated manifesto in by? How is the S1 manifesto btw? I haven't looked at it in a while.
Also, Tuesday I'm going to a midnight screening of the HP movie. Are you?